Too much going on, most of which is unbelievable.

I loved this book it was very good and addicitive can't wait to read more from this author.

The story premise was good, but the author needs to spend more time on research, character building and grammar. Educate yourself and try again. Good plot idea.

Lots of grammar errors. Too many things happening that don't go together at all. Would make a good rough draft instead of a book. Author needs to research the subject matter more to make the book believeable.

As the author of this book I am amused to read the words of criticism by the readers. I am also thrilled when someone enjoys my first book thank you to all who have taken the time to read it.