I love this concept, but the language is unfortunate. The terminology reminds me of some of the '50's science fiction films. I think Dora Machado has a gift, but that that gift would be better showcased without the indeciferable terminology.
Some clubs who like science fiction may find this a good read and I admit I only read the excerpt provided here.

This book is a MUST for anyone who reads SFF. It is NOT a Young Adult book and its sophistication may turn off some readers, especially those who don't normally read the genre. The characters and plot have a depth that is frequently missing in many of today's books. It's not a surprise to me to see that it has won national awards. If you are looking for something beyond the ordinary that will cause you to think and analyze, not only the book, but yourself - then this is for you. If you're looking for Harry Potter or Twilight, then stick with YA.