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Nothing Right: Short Stories
by Antonya Nelson

Published: 2010-02-02
Paperback : 296 pages
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In her latest stories, Antonya Nelson sets her characters in the middle of the country, at the edge of reason. In the title story, a depressed mother follows her delinquent son from juvenile court to the maternity ward, shocked when teenage fatherhood turns his life around. In “Party of ...
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Introduction

In her latest stories, Antonya Nelson sets her characters in the middle of the country, at the edge of reason. In the title story, a depressed mother follows her delinquent son from juvenile court to the maternity ward, shocked when teenage fatherhood turns his life around. In “Party of One,” a woman tries to protect her suicidal sister from a painful breakup, while hiding a dark secret of her own. “Falsetto” also features a protective sister, who learns a lot from her adolescent brother in the wake of a tragic accident. In “People People,” a married woman discovers her own insecurities while trying to shelter her obese, romantically destructive sister. In “Biodegradable,” a traveling businesswoman finds a romantic connection unexpectedly close to home. “Or Else” and “OBO” both feature desperate characters trying to lie their way into tight-knit, nuclear families, with unexpected results. In “Kansas” and “We and They,” bohemian Wichita families cope with unexpected challenges: a kidnapping within the family in the first story, and an unexpected alliance with religious neighbors in the latter. “DWI” and “Shauntrelle” both take place in the aftermath of a romantic affair: In “DWI,” a woman copes with her lover’s suicide, and “Shauntrelle” features an unlikely female alliance in the wake of a failed marriage and love affair.

In Nothing Right, human relationships—between lovers, spouses, siblings, and parents and children—are laid bare, revealing the fundamental vulnerabilities we all share.

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Excerpt

NOTHING RIGHT
Never shake a baby,” the flyer insisted, “Never, never,
never.”The public service brochures displayed at the district
attorney’s office seemed to be speaking to Hannah, each
pertinent and personal.The face on “Break the cycle of domestic
violence” was one big yellow-blue bruise. “Substance abuse
abuses us all,” another insisted, a martini glass with a slash
through it. The illustration was so highly detailed as to include
a toothpick-speared olive.
Her fifteen-year-old son had demanded that Hannah wait
rather than join him and his probation officer. Down the hall,
a door banged open, a courtroom released. A young man in
an orange jumpsuit emerged between two older, somber men,
trailed by weeping women. His lawyers, his guards, his mother,
sister, girlfriend. Like the brochures, this scene also seemed
a warning; Hannah had passed from one kind of life into
another. A small boy brought up the rear of the procession,
one hand hitching his pants, one swiping at his running nose.
Hannah felt close to bursting into tears. Ten years from now,
that little boy would be wearing the jumpsuit, leading the pack.
Her own son seemed poised somewhere between these two,
teetering.
“Ma,” he brayed, suddenly beside her, nudging to indicate
that his appointment had ended, they were free to go. Still
free, Hannah thought, and her mood lifted.
“You take us to the most interesting places,” she said as
they exited the courthouse. This had been the third required
monthly meeting since he’d made a bomb threat at school.
Beside her, passing through the metal detectors, Leo pulled in
a savoring breath. “Good times,” he murmured. He’d been to
jail, he’d worn handcuffs. He had a psychologist, a lawyer, and
a probation officer; this current round of meetings was part of
something called “diversion,” and maybe it was sort of amusing.
Leo’s delinquency had to become something else, Hannah
supposed, having already been terrifying, divisive, pricey, and
heartbreaking.
He was her second son, and he’d never been the one she understood
best. Recently, she’d found herself disgusted by him:
she didn’t want to share a bathroom or kitchen, bar soap or
utensils with her own boy. His brother, who’d passed through
adolescence sobbing instead of shouting, had not prepared her
for Leo. The pure ugliness of a more traditional male’s transformation
to manhood—the inflamed skin and foul odor, the
black scowl, the malice in every move—might eventually convince
a parent to despair, to say to that child, “You are dead to
me.” Because it would be easier—more decorous, acceptable—
to mourn the loss than to keep waging a hopeless battle.
Their next stop was Wichita Central High School.
“Leo’s mother,” the PE coach greeted her. He was precisely
as billed: soldierlike, down to the bullet-shaped shaved head
and stiff-armed formality. “G.I. Joe,” her son called him. In
his first-period class, Leo had recently pierced his own lip with a safety pin. In the divot beneath his nose, a pulsing
bump he’d tried to pass off as a bug bite and then a pimple.
Finally he’d just shown up at breakfast with the pin hanging
there, clicking against his cereal spoon. A parent was required
to come pay penance, help reclaim the old gymnasium. The
smell alone could have brought back adolescence—sweat,
fried food, patchouli—but this was also the high school Hannah
had attended. Back then, this had been Central’s only
gym. In the years since, groups would intermittently creak
open the metal doors and throw a party or host a science fair.
The drama club had contributed a couple of sofas.Windows,
metal-barred and streaked with pigeon droppings, let through
a gloomy cold light; voices echoed. Hannah had played basketball
here, once upon a time. More recently, her first son
had acted in plays on the very stage that, today, G.I. Joe would
lead the group in dismantling.
“Leo’s mother, meet Dylan’s father.” Several fathers, Reagan’s,
Meagan’s, Dusty’s, and Jordan’s; a roomful of uncomfortable
men, glancing around with their hands jammed in
their pockets, awaiting instruction. Hannah couldn’t help prescribing
makeovers for everyone. First, twenty pounds off each,
that defeated weight of middle age, of parenthood.Next: therapy
and SSRIs, all around. Hannah knew that whatever she
saw as deficits in these people, they themselves recognized.
They, too, wished not to seem sad and skittish. They wished
they were trim and brave and confident. They wished they
were young—not as young as their offspring, these children,
clustered and glowering fifty paces away, also in the proverbial
doghouse—but younger than their forty or fifty years. They
knew their best years had passed, that they’d been sapped of
something vital, and now could only make futile guesses at
how to get it back.
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Discussion Questions

From the Publisher:

1. How does “Nothing Right,” the title story and the first in the collection, set the scene for the rest of the book? What themes, relationships, and problems in “Nothing Right” are echoed in later stories?

2. “We and They” and “Nothing Right” both revolve around an unexpected teenage pregnancy. How are the young couples’ circumstances similar and different in each story? Which pregnancy seems to have a better result for the families involved?

3. All of the stories in Nothing Right take place in the Midwest or Southwest. In which of the stories is the setting particularly important? Which stories especially conjure up a room, a house, a city, or a landscape?

4. In “Party of One,” Nicholas Dempsey goes from thinking sisters Mona and Emily are strikingly similar, to thinking they’re nothing alike. What changes Nicholas’s mind? What similarities and differences between the sisters are invisible to Nicholas?

5. Discuss the effects of secrets and lies in the story “OBO.” Who is the most duplicitous and who is the most truthful among the story’s four main characters, Abby, Lucia, Michael, and Christine? What secrets are hidden within the Bonatello family home in Wichita?

6. In “Falsetto,” Michelle sees a reflection of herself, her brother Ellton, and her boyfriend Max, and “Just that quick, she quit loving her boyfriend.” (88) What brings about Michelle’s sudden change of heart? How does her decision affect her relationship with her brother?

7. Pairs of adult sisters are prominent in the stories “Party of One,” “Kansas,” and “People People.” Compare the relationships in each of these stories. How do these sisters by turns help and hurt each other? Which sisters seem to have the healthiest sibling bond? Which have the most destructive?

8. Much of the action in “Kansas” takes place on the family’s cell phones. How does each family member use the family cell plan? What cracks and fissures in the family are revealed by this collective plan?

9. Discuss the influence of déjà vu in “Biodegradable.” What encounters and relationships seem to repeat themselves over the course of the story?

10. In “Shauntrelle,” Constance compares Fanny Mann’s first impressions to her own: Fanny Mann appears warm, while Constance appears cold. When do these impressions appear true? When do the two women seem to switch warm and cold roles?

11. In both “Or Else” and “OBO,” a character lies to gain entry into another family’s home. Compare and contrast David’s and Abby’s motivations for deceit. Which character’s reasons for lying seem more justifiable? Which liar appears more desperate by the end of the story?

12. “Or Else” ends on a question, as Danielle and David stand outside the Hart house: “Danielle asked [David], “Do you wish you were in there, instead of out here?” (239) Does David’s negative response feel like another lie, the beginning of a truth, or a combination of the two? Why does the story end on this uncertain note?

13. Adultery takes place frequently in Nothing Right; many of the characters are beginning, ending, or negotiating an affair. Discuss how Nelson portrays adultery in each story. On the whole, does she seem to humanize or demonize these sexual impulses? Explain.

14. In many of these stories, dead lovers or relatives have a strong hold on living characters. Which characters seem mostly motivated by grief? Which characters seem able to overcome their losses?

15. If you’ve read Nelson’s stories or novels before, how does Nothing Right compare to her previous work? If you’re new to Nelson’s short stories, which made the strongest impression?

16. According to the San Francisco Chronicle, “Nelson, an astute observer of everyday conflicts, has skillfully mapped out life in this unforgettable collection, and sooner or later a reader will run into herself in a story, the character’s troubles as real as the reader’s own.” Did you find a version of yourself in any of Nelson’s characters? If so, which character spoke to you?

Notes From the Author to the Bookclub

About the Author:

Antonya Nelson is the author of eight books of fiction, including Female Trouble and the novels Talking in Bed, Nobody’s Girl, and Living to Tell. Nelson’s work has appeared in the New Yorker, Esquire, Harper’s, Redbook, and many other magazines, as well as in anthologies such as Prize Stories: The O. Henry Awards and The Best American Short Stories. She has received a Guggenheim Fellowship, an NEA grant, and, recently, the Rea Award for Short Fiction. She is married to writer Robert Boswell and lives in New Mexico, Colorado, and Texas, where she holds the Cullen Chair in Creative Writing at the University of Houston.

Critical Praise:

“In this powerful collection of 11 short stories, Nelson’s brilliantly constructed characters negotiate love, family, home and truth. Nelson consistently pays exquisite attention to detail, resulting in rich, vivid characters and settings…Nelson writes with wonderful grace and skill, each word carefully chosen, each passage carefully constructed.

This beautiful collection is another remarkable accomplishment for a writer often hailed as one of our most talented storytellers.”—Publishers Weekly (starred review)

“Those wondering whether the spirit of bohemian anarchy endures in today’s hunkered-down Red America need look only as far as the marvelously reliable Wichita, Kansas, native Antonya Nelson’s latest story collection, Nothing Right (Bloomsbury)…Nelson delivers convincing portraits—11 of them here—of folk who are alarmingly drinking-positive, more than a little familiar with illicit drugs, and all too conversant in the language of infidelity…Sordid, cynical, and supremely romantic tales.”—Elle Magazine

“Stellar… never has anxiety been made as entertaining as it is here. Nelson deploys a quirky, far-reaching humor and resonant detail to describe both the quiet and not-so-quiet implosions of midwestern families as they attempt to cope with contemporary life…. Nelson is in complete command of her material here, infusing her stories with just the right shades of poignancy, humor, and heartbreak.”—Booklist (starred review)

“Nelson is at her best creating densely packed, almost novel-like family mini-sagas.”—Kirkus

“Delightfully messy…Nelson gives readers plenty to ponder as her frequently baffled characters struggle to make sense of the circumstances in which they find themselves…Readers who relish conflict will burn through the pages as the disasters pile up, while those who appreciate well-rounded characters will be impressed with the variety of responses to said disasters, which reveal just how strong, flexible, and adaptable human beings can be under pressure (see especially "Kansas" and "Biodegradable"). This weary hymn to coping with life's cruelties is a tour de force.”—Library Journal

“Nelson never chafes against the limitations of her chosen form, the realistic well-made story. It’s the ideal medium for a writer who isn’t afraid to remind us of the familiar, who values insight over epiphany.”—New York Times

“I don’t know how I missed the extensively published and acclaimed writer Antonya Nelson, but I’m glad my first encounter was this collection of short stories. They are funny in a dark, subterranean way, gracefully told, and populated by characters you wouldn’t want to know but already know intimately… These difficult characters… may seem impossible to like, but because of Nelson’s fluid skill and insight, you end up caring about them all.”—Bust

“You have only to read Antonya Nelson's new story collection, Nothing Right, to appreciate her talent…. Nelson, unlike so many writers today, is not serving up magic realism in her stories. Her magic, in fact, is their powerful realism: deeply understood, beautifully expressed.”—Carole Goldberg, The Hartford Courant

“Nelson never chafes against the limitations of her chosen form, the realistic well-made story. It’s the ideal medium for a writer who isn’t afraid to remind us of the familiar, who values insight over epiphany. Nor is Nelson particularly interested in the way the world at large shapes our private lives. These stories could take place at just about any time in the last 30 years – after the sexual revolution diminished, without destroying, the scandal of adultery and the tragedy of divorce. Indeed, it comes as a surprise when, in ‘Shauntrelle,’ Nelson alludes to ‘collateral damage,’ and a world that contains Iraq and Afghanistan heaves into view. The wars that concern Nelson’s characters are fought much closer to home.” —Adam Kirsch, The New York Times Book Review

“Antonya Nelson’s Nothing Right [targets] the romantic poseurs in all of us.”—Megan O’Grady, Vogue

“Nothing Right is a wild ride, and one of the very best books of the year. Nelson’s method is pure realism—no trendy experiments in form or postmodern hijinks here—and yet these 11 stories are deliriously, satisfyingly intricate…Nelson works the material like a conductor…Nelson’s sentences are long and insight-studded, almost Jamesian in their complexity, but she’s good for a quick punchline, too.”—Daily Beast

Suggested reading from the publisher:

Antonya Nelson, Female Trouble, Talking in Bed, Nobody’s Girl, and Living to Tell; Robert Boswell, The Heyday of Insensitive Bastards; Lorrie Moore, A Gate at the Stairs and Birds of America; Raymond Carver, Where I’m Calling From; Maile Meloy, Both Ways Is the Only Way I Want It; John Updike, My Father’s Tears and Other Stories; Mary Gaitskill, Don’t Cry; Wells Tower, Everything Ravaged, Everything Burned; Elizabeth Strout, Olive Kitteridge; Dave Eggers, Zeitoun; Richard Russo, That Old Cape Magic; Joyce Carol Oates, Dear Husband,.

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